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What I learned about customer service from my ex-wife, and How to keep your Gym and Tanning members from Bad Mouthing your gym if and when they cancel their Gym Membership

Sunday, January 16th, 2011

What I learned about customer service from my ex-wife, and How to keep your Gym and Tanning members from Bad Mouthing your gym if and when they cancel their Gym Membership

When it comes to Fitness Center Marketing, this is just as important as any Marketing you can do for your Fitness Center, Gym, or Tanning Salon

So what did my ex-wife teach me about customer service? That some people will never be satisfied, Period! Oh, and never to go into court unless you have a bag full of money and bus full of lawyers, and that means not trying to sue a gym member over a few hundred dollars because it will cost you time, money, and more members than that one.

I know you think your gym and members are different from the one’s you hear about from new members that come in saying “that other gym is pitiful, they suckered me into signing a contract and didn’t tell me so and so”

Then two months later when these same people try to cancel their 1 or 2 year contract at your gym, and you tell them the same thing the other gym told them, they go out and bad mouth your gym.

There are some people you cant satisfy. I know, because I’ve got an ex-wife that would make the devil give his contract up on her soul.

Here’s what I do with someone who breaks their contract or just wants to quit because their unhappy at my gym.

I try to talk to them first and find out why their unhappy. Than I tell them they have a contractual obligation just like with a cell phone company.

If that fails, and I can tell they’re the type that will just cancel a credit card or checking account anyway, then i will tell them to consider their contract cancelled and hope they will return when they decide to join a gym again.

This has never failed to get a positive response, and some have come and rejoined later. But the best part is that the bad mouthing almost stopped.

I do try to make aware to the member at sign up, about our policy about cancelling their membership.

I started putting a cancellation notice on the bottom of our contracts that they have to initial so they cant come in and say, like I’ve heard so many times, “i wasn’t told about the cancellation policy. even though its on the back in all the fine print too.

I don’t like fine print about an important issue, so i have it on there twice so they cant say they didn’t know. Your employees are not going to remember to tell everyone that sign’s up about the cancellation policy, and even if they did, they’ll tell you that they weren’t told.

I know you hard nosed business folks are saying ” the contract plainly states the policy, so i dont care”, and your right. But i’m just telling you what i have expierenced for 8 years now.

I have members come in or call in and all the time saying they haven’t been to the gym in 9 months, and they should not be required to finish their contract out because of that, or they say “I called 2 months ago and left a message on the answering machine saying i wanted to cancel, and your gym is still drafting my account and i want a refund for the past 2 months.”

With these people i have no fear. Tell them to get their contract out and read it again. Of course they say then that they lost their contract. then i tell them I’ll mail them a copy if they like. All the time being nice. Usually this disarms these excuse makers, but sometimes i cancel them if they are the type of people that i spoke of at the beginning of this post.

Nice will get you so much further in life. My ex-wife has much to learn in this area, thank god i cancelled her contract!!!

To learn how to open a 24 hour fitness center, build and start a gym from scratch, manage a gym, and fitness center marketing, check out my book at www.how2ownagym.com  

Questions or comments?

email:  fitnessmarketing@comcast.net

Pro’s and Con’s of personal member security alert system, or 911 pendant, and which one you should you buy when starting a fitness center

Wednesday, January 12th, 2011

Pro’s and Con’s of personal member security alert system, or 911 pendant, and which one you should you buy when starting a fitness center or tanning salon

You can also use this in your fitness center marketing campaigns like I do by stating the safety factor for women and older folks

There are many options out there now that allow your gym members to feel secure when alone in your gym or tanning salon

I’ve seen different kinds of emergency pendants, like the in-wall mounted kind, in gyms like snap fitness and 24 hour fitness. If your like me though, you don’t want a monthly fee for monitoring. There’s only one product I’ve found that you can buy and just plug the base into your phone line  and that’s it. There’s only one button on the pendant and when pressed, the only phone number it knows is 911.

You do have to have a phone line for this to work right though. I had a VOIP router  by T-mobile and it kept interfearing with my cable router and that in turn made the pendant keep going dead so I kept having to check it and restart it all the time.

In my gym I use The Guardian 911 pendant

The only one that requires No Monitoring Fees, Service Charges or Contracts ever.

Talk Directly through your pendant to a 911 emergency operator at the push of a button.

The Guardian Alert 911 system is a set – a base station which plugs into the phone jack – and a pendant which is worn by the user.

The system can operate anywhere in and around the home – with the base station plugged into a phone jack in the central part of the home.

The Pendant runs up to a year on a AAA alkaline battery (included). The pendant is splash resistant so it can even be taken into the shower. The Test Button on the bottom of the unit gives an audible confirmation of battery condition. Hold the Test Button in an extra few seconds – and you can confirm that the full system is working.

System Suggested Retail: $199.95.

 

To learn how to open a 24 hour fitness center, build and start a gym from scratch, manage a gym, and fitness center marketing, check out my book at www.how2ownagym.com
Shannon Cook is a fitness center marketing consultant and owner of 24 hour Temple Gym and Tanning in Northport, Alabama
To contact Shannon for copywriting and consulting for your gym marketing, email: fitnessmarketing@comcast.net

My Latest Successful Press Release I wrote about Tim Ferriss’s new book “the four hour body”, and it got the attention of the local news quickly, got my gym noticed, and got some free gym business leads, all because I did one thing, I gave great Information.

Friday, January 7th, 2011

“My Latest Successful Press Release I wrote about Tim Ferriss’s new book “the four hour body”, and it got the attention of the local news quickly, got my gym noticed, and got some free gym business leads, all because I did one thing, I gave great Information”

I didnt try to push my gym or sell memberships at all when i sent out this press release.

I knew they would see that i really and truly wanted to get this great life changing info out to their readers.

I read tim ferriss’s new book “The Four Hour Body” and thought this new way of dieting and exercising would be great for people who think they could never lose their weight and would not want to exercise because they think it takes being in a gym for hours at a time for many days a week.

Tim’s book dispells all that, and so did i.

You may not believe that a gym owner would ever tell anyone to stay out of a gym more if they want to lose weight and build more muscle, but in fact its psycoliogical, because they will still have to come to the gym for the tools they need to exercise, i just tell them how they can do it easier.

Here’s the press release that got picked up, and im sure it didnt hurt the sells of  Tim’s book either.

  Temple Gymwww.templegym.tv   902 Union Chapel roadNorthport, AL 35473Phone (205)Email: templegym@comcast.net

Press Release

Contact: Shannon CookPhone: 000000000000Email templegmcast.net FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE7 A.M. CST, January 1, 2011

 

“spend less time in the gym and lose more weight?” 

 

YES, a gym owner said this. “I see people come in all gung ho when they first join the gym only to see them fall off a month later from overdoing it and being so sore they cant move for days, after their first few workouts.

 they think that’s the way they’ll feel after every workout”,and they don’t have to do all that to lose weight and tone up, says shannon cook, owner of 24 hour temple gym and tanning salon in northport, alabama.

he goes on to tell why you don’t have to become a gym rat to get results

spending 30 minutes 3 to 4 times a week is adequate according to “The colorado expriment”. a study done in 1973 by creator of nautilus fitness equipment, arthur jones, and the same expriment done in 2007 by author of the book “four hour body”, Tim Ferriss.

the study states

“High-intensity training is not easy . . . the training sessions are brief, indeed must be brief, but there is an apparently natural inclination on the part of most subjects to hold back.” Most exercises are terminated at a point well below an actual point of muscular failure, then, in an effort to compensate for the reduction intensity, the usual practice is to add more exercise to the program.

However, no amount of additional exercise will compensate for a reduction in the intensity of exercise … and if carried to extremes, which such training frequently is, the subject may actually prevent growth by exceeding the recovery ability of the system”.

What is going to failure? (I.E., REACHING THE POINT WHERE YOU CAN NO LONGER MOVE THE WEIGHT). TIM FERRISS ALSO PERFORMED EVERY REPETITION WITH A 5/5 CADENCE (FIVE SECONDS UP, FIVE SECONDS DOWN) ACCORDING TO HIS BOOK.

arnold schwarzenegger made exercising to muscle failure popular, and won a record number of competitions by doing it.

however, arnold did more than 30 minutes of exercising, but he also wanted to have over 200 pounds of muscle on his frame, most of us just want to be TONED, feel good, and have more energy which can be achieved simply by devoting the 30 minutes you exercise to actual intense exercise.

“I know being a gym owner people will find it hard to believe that im telling them to spend less time in my gym, but i’d be doing them a disservice by telling them to spend 2 hours per session in here and get burnt out, people don’t have that amount of time these days shannon cook says”, but having a 24 hour fully automated Gym and Tanning Salon makes it eaiser for gym goers to have all access to the Tools they will need to acomplish any physical goal.

END.

Shannon Cook can be reached at fitnessmarketing@comcast.net  for questions or comments.

Website: www.templegym.tv

Email: templegym@comcast.net

That’s the exact layout for my press release. always give the reporter or editor good information that they and their readers need to know, and you’ll get free publicity for your fitness center or gym.  this is how i get a lot of my marketing done for free.

If you’d like Shannon to write your press release contact him at fitnessmarketing@comcast.net

To learn how to open a 24 hour fitness center, build and start a gym from scratch, manage a gym, and fitness center marketing, check out my book at www.how2ownagym.com

“Making Postcards Look Like An Important Document To Get Them Eyeballed”

Wednesday, August 25th, 2010

“Making Postcards Look Like An Important Document To Get Them Eyeballed”

By: Shannon Cook         Fitness Marketer

               I get all kinds of postcards in the mail about a wide range of subjects from dentist to medicines to gyms, and I always see the picture on the front and throw them away. So when I decided to do my postcards I decided to make them look like there something very important. I had the unfortunate luxury one time of getting a past due notice from the power company, and that red postcard stuck with me when I was trying to figure out how to get my postcards read.

 

 

What would you do if you found a past due notice in your mail box, the first thing you do is put it in the “read” stack. Then you open it to find that it’s not a real past due notice for a utility company, but a past due notice on extending your life. With a headline and body copy that keeps them as interested as watching Barack Obama figure out what to say without a teleprompter, or watching George Bush dodge a shoe like a cat being hit with water from a hose.

So, now with the bipartisan politics out of the way, here’s how you go about this scratch and sniff marketing project.

 I start with a red post card stock that tears into 4 postcards. I print ½ the page with my copy on one side and the same copy n the other ½ of the page, this way I can fold the ½ together and tape it so they will have to open it to look inside and the post office only charges me for the small postcard rate.

            Then on one side of the back I use a stamped font that you can download off the net, and I write “Past Due,” to look like a past due power bill, so they will be worried enough to open it and read it, but you must keep the curiosity going inside from the past due that got them to open it to start with. For my mailing list I use Info USA, online, where you can select certain demographics and areas around your facility. I recommend not going more than 3 miles from you facility with any mailing list.         

            For a note: I never use any postcards with a picture on it like a bodybuilder or really fit person, or even a piece of exercise equipment, if you must use a picture make it a unique one and one that directly goes with your message.

To learn how to open a 24 hour fitness center, build and start a gym from scratch, manage a gym, and fitness center marketing, check out my book at www.how2ownagym.com

            Shannon Cook is the owner on Temple Gym in Northport, Alabama and a fitness marketing consultant, you can view my blog at www.fitnessmarketing.TV or contact Shannon at fitnessmarketing@comcast.net with questions

Handwritten business cards for your gym or fitness center business

Wednesday, August 25th, 2010

Handwritten business cards for your gym, fitness center, or tanning salon that stand out from your competitors and make the receivers laugh, and hold on to them to show their friends

 I like to be different, so instead of getting tattoos to stand out, i use things that will be memorable, and when it comes to business cards i want people to keep and share my cards with others

whats the best wat to do that, being funny  

Being a part time comedian, I love making people laugh, so I decided to give prospects something that is out of the ordinary when it comes to business cards.

Here’s the card I made, its two sided, so they see the fat guy and his BEFORE picture, then the AFTER picture on the other side, but either way they read it they laugh

 

I wrote this out in about an hour and sent it to my printer and had 250 cards made

Every time I hand them out, I get a laugh and have many people come back to me and ask for more to give to their friends, which is the whole point anyway, isn’t it?

What can you come up with that will make a prospect want to keep your card and show it to others?

My wife tells me some of the fitness marketing copywriting ads I come up with may be offensive to someone, but it always the people that aren’t gonna use my gym anyway, so who cares.

One banner I put up said, “being dead 24 hours a day, or exercising 30 minutes a day, which fits your schedule better?”

Another banner I put up was, “Fat and Ugly? Just want to be ugly? Then visit www.templegym.tv for the fat loss, and the plastic surgeon for the other?

I had people sending me emails all the time and stopping me and telling me how much they loved the banners, and not one complaint.

Want me to write funny stuff for your ads or cards and even radio and tv commercials?

To learn how to open a 24 hour fitness center, build and start a gym from scratch, manage a gym, and fitness center marketing, check out my book at www.how2ownagym.com

Shannon cook-  fitness, gym, and tanning salon marketing consultant

Shannon can be reached at fitnessmarketing@comcast.net